A few
years ago the Deutscher Sprachrat, which promotes the German language at home
and abroad, ran a poll to find “the most beautiful German word”. Musing on the results would easily fill a
whole post, but I mention it here because, having occasionally worked as a
freelance translator, I’ve got a little list of unfavourite German words, which – perhaps perversely – reminds me
of this campaign. Unlike the words in the poll, however, my unfavourites are defined
not by sound or meaning, but by downright difficulty to translate.
Of course
German, like every language, has its classic “untranslatables”, words
considered to have a powerful symbolic or emotional weight impossible to convey
exactly in another language. One of the poll winners is a fine example. Look up a dictionary definition of
“Habseligkeit” and then read the winning justification and you’ll appreciate
the gap.
For example, the verb “erschließen” tends to make my heart sink;
it
basically means to open something up or make it accessible, but used to
describe the function of a library catalogue – “Der Katalog erschließt zum
erstenmal die Manuskripte der Bibliothek” – it can make for awkward English
unless you change the focus slightly: “The catalogue offers the first full
description of the
Library’s manuscripts”. Provided that is the case and the
catalogue is fully descriptive rather than a finding aid. “Systematisch” is
an other particular unfavourite, “Ansatz” can be a headache, and even
“Wissenschaft” itself can be tricky.
Another
problem occurs where German uses both a “Latin” and a “Germanic” word for the
same thing. Of course you can often pull off the same trick in English, but
sometimes the two German words only have one obvious English synonym: I
recently found an author’s
“Selbstbiographie” described in the same sentence as an important “autobiographisches
Zeugnis”, but “His autobiography is an important autobiographical document”
sounds distinctly odd in English.
Out of
context, or to a formally qualified translator, this probably sounds like small
beer. But I do find that it’s the superfically straightforward words, rather
than the famous untranslatables or false friends, which set traps for the unwary.
It fills me with admiration for translators who work on literary texts and have
to (re-)create a work or art and reflect an individual voice as well as
conveying a coherent meaning. My colleague Patricia Tiney has successfully done
just that in her newly published translation of a story by Theodor Fontane, Under the Pear Tree, the first full English version of this work.
Finally, despite my rogues gallery of unfavourite German words, I have my own favourites too. Like the Sprachrat’s poll respondents, I love these for their sound as much as anything. And top of my personal poll? For many years that has been “Ewigkeit” (Eternity) – a lovely, spacious word for a lovely, spacious concept.
[SR]
Thank you for this. I had completely missed the Competition for the Most Beautiful word in German... One of my favourites is "Mutterseelenallein" - it's meaning is clear, and it is fairly hard to translate (I would say "utterly lost and alone" to get near the German meaning), but how the soul(s) of a mother and loneliness are connected: that is almost like a koan to me.
Also, it was nice to hear about he news of Patricia Tiney's publication - I haven't yet seen her translation of Fontane, but I also envy people who can do these brave literary/poetic translations.
Posted by: cg | 24 May 2010 at 10:30 AM